Challenge 377 - Fall from grace

[m_findlow]

Title: Fall from grace
Author: m_findlow
Characters: Jack, Ianto
Rating: PG
Challenge: 377 - Surprise
Notes: Jack's surprise doesn't quite go to plan

Jack watched glumly as Ianto reached for the box again. It was empty, so he quickly replaced it with another on the bedside table.

Honk! Sniffle.

'Not quite what I intended for your birthday surprise.'

'Paragliding was great up until the point where you crashed us into the lake.'

Jack looked devastated.

'But, if you hadn't unclipped me from my harness, we both would have drowned. Thankyou by the way.'

'What are immortal boyfriends for? I'm sorry I ruined your day.'

'Look on the bright side. Now I've got you waiting on me, for a change.'

'More soup?'

'Yes, please.'

Comments

[bk_forever]

Awwww! Poor Ianto! *tucks fuzzy blanket around him* Jack's surprises don't always work out, do they?

[m-findlow.livejournal.com]

He meant well, and they really were having a good time til it all went a bit pear shaped.

So much for my news years resolution, lol!

[bk_forever]

Yeah, you gave poor Ianto a surprise cold!

(At least I - through Jack - tried to do something nice for him!)

[jo02]

With Torchwood's luck I'm surprised falling in the water and almost drowning was the worst thing that happened :)